Bear’s Birthday
This is my first uploaded draft of this children’s story. This piece has seen much trial & error many edits to get to the stage it is at. I am still not totally satisfied with the final product but am posting it here regardless. It is my hope that some will view the story and decide to offer suggestions on my writing and the design. Together with your input I hope to make this story better and more refined.
A more detailed post on my reflections and procedure for preparing this story will follow. I have had a lot of fun creating this story from the photo’s of John Maschuk (whom I haven’t found an online link for yet, but will).
*NOTE: Please click through to the YouTube Page. The pesky You Tube image embeded on my video within the blog detracts from the graphics and covers my writing.*
Kyle, I really enjoyed your video story. I think the sound effects and music add to the story. Great job
I enjoyed your story. Everyone loves a surprise party. Note an edit….you have hoped and I think you read hopped.
I bet the grade 1’s loved this book…I know that I will be sharing it with the grade 1’s that I read to every week.
Kyle, you made me smile. And I think anytime a story creates emotion, it’s a good story.
Great story Kyle. I loved the sound effects that went along with the story. I bet the grade one’s loved it